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I woke up with my mind in a haze,
The cold checker floor cold to the touch.
My head felt as if it were in a blaze,
As I took a bite of cake, though not too much.

My body grew to twelve feet tall.
Then I took a sip out of an eerie vial,
And suddenly was far too small.
And through the door, reality in denial.

Some nagging flowers greeted me,
I grumbled at them and ignored.
Then, a peculiar caterpillar with a monocle to see
Questioned the identity I'd left unexplored.

Colors were wild in this strange realm,
Yellow eyes winking at me out of nowhere.
A hatter not at sanity's helm,
Invited me to a tea party so rare.

And one last thing, a wicked queen
Of hearts, it's so ironic!
And off with my head is what she said,
After a croquet game so demonic.

Under a tree, I came to my senses,
And thought, "'T is all but a dream?"
But to this day, I'm a top the fences.
Is "reality" all that it seems?
Based off of Alice in Wonderland, in Alice's perspective. I hope I did alright, I was trying to keep to the rhyme scheme and don't know if I did so well. I hope you like it!
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MyDeadlySins4You Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist
Totally amazed n.n
It's a wonderful piece!
xLuckyxFridayx13x Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :3
blackandblueandred Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i liked the last verse, it's going a bit far, and adding a little bit of a twist...if that's the right word....which I'm pretty sure it's not xP
xLuckyxFridayx13x Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks. what exactly do you mean by "its going a bit far", if you dont mind me asking?
blackandblueandred Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
as in, you're taking into account her thoughts and feeling o.o it was meant in a good way XD not a bad way, sorry for not being clear
xLuckyxFridayx13x Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ok i just wanted to make sure! thanks. :)
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