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I lost myself up in the stars
A glance was all it took
The shimmering of distant realms
Stole me with just one look

The “unreachable” goals, abandoned wishes
And dreams that I once lost
Were all I needed to motivate
My nebulous inner thoughts

Unreadable, unthinkable
I jotted down with a pen
Of purple ink, now who would think?
The stars could be so grand

Give up the petty wishes
Chanted up into the night
A pair of legs, or a perhaps a page
Is what you need to fight

The stars did steal me up above
I broke the heavy gaze
For gazing is just doing nothing
Compared to devising a phrase
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You can't just sit around on your bum waiting for your life to happen... You must get up and MAKE it happen.
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~CarloGrims Nov 27, 2012  Student Writer
This is freaking beautiful. I wanna read this a few times before getting up and making things happen.
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~xLuckyxFridayx13x Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :) I'm glad that you find it inspirational.
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Mood: Love ~stealthyninja21 Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
I can really really relate to this, went to that phase too, where you must decide to get off your butt and do something. Nicely done :)
"Unreadable, unthinkable
I jotted down with a pen
Of purple ink, now who would think?
The stars could be so grand"
i jot down stuff with BLUE ink :)
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~xLuckyxFridayx13x Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! yea i usually use black ink but i hav a purple pen and i love to use it every once in a while :) plus i thought that "purple" flowed better than "black" or "blue". :D
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~FairyRora Nov 20, 2012  Student Writer
I really like this! And I agree, we must be our own rain makers, we can't sit around doing nothing. Wonderful imagery!
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~xLuckyxFridayx13x Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! (^_^)
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